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    30 July

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    51.The following appeared in a medical newsletter.

    "Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some
    patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis
    has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of
    patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle
    injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took
    antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time
    was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in
    the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician,
    were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking
    antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly
    reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain
    would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."


    reccoon认为的首要攻击点:
    secondary infections may ——> 一个仅仅是may 的事情,居然推广到都会发生,显然错了
    some——>all 一些病人 推广到 所有病人 显然也错了
    severe muscle strain 和一般的 muscle strain 病人能同等对待么?
    看了raccoon的<argument就该这样写(一)>,是关于肌肉损伤(51)的那个.我认为他的分析理论是正确的(分清主次),对我的帮助很大.但是他对此题的分析结论我认为有些吹毛求疵,或者说扣字眼.最主要的就是他的第一,二攻击点:secondary infections may ——> 一个仅仅是may 的事情,居然推广到都会发生,显然错了. 原因如下:
    文章的主要目的就是用实验证明受损肌肉的二次感染会延缓康复时间,从而得出结论:所有患者应服用抗生素防止二次感染,因为二次感染会延缓康复.先不说实验能不能得出结论,单说reccoon说的那个"may"的推广问题,我认为这是每个有良知和负责任的医生都应该做的,就像打疫苗一样,我不知道我以后会不会得狂犬病,但我打了,我就肯定得不了!!任何一个严重肌肉损伤患者都有可能二次感染,即便二次感染不会导致康复延缓,给患者都服用抗生素是必要的,因为可能导致并发症啊,肌肉倒是不疼了,又发烧了,这不浪的吗?reccoon显然把may这个词看得过于重要了.同理可证reccoon的第二攻击点:some——>all 一些病人 推广到 所有病人 显然也错了.
    他的第三攻击点倒是对了,severe muscle strain 和一般的 muscle strain 病人能同等对待么?我认为这是第一攻击点.文中没有说明是不是所有的肌肉损伤都有可能会二次感染,因为医生怀疑的是重度损伤的二次感染,要证明的也应是重度损伤的二次感染.可能轻度损伤的二次感染会不会导致康复延缓 ?可能轻度损伤根本就没有二次感染,这才是主要问题所在,overgeneralization在于不是所有的肌肉损伤患者都是严重损伤,也有轻度的,实验证明的只是严重损伤,没说轻度损伤的患者服抗生素有没有效,甚至不知道轻度损伤会不会有二次感染,所以论据不足以得出结论.
    然后,接下来再说说实验上的漏洞,患者的年龄啊,体制啊,性别啊,还有就是进入实验之前有没有治疗过,治疗了多久了.
    本人愚钝,呵呵,请指教~~~
    ps:红色字体是reccoon原话.
     
    28 July

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    121. Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity. 虽然大多数人都承认个人的利益,但是事实上个人的经济成功需要的是合作。

    新东方本题的翻译有问题,像金山快译翻的.benefit of individuality不是个人利益,应是个性的好处,这里可以译成个性的重要性。 conformity没有合作的意思,应是,顺从,遵从的意思。个人认为题目的本意是“个性”的反义词,简单的引申为合作有欠妥当,倒不如妥协更贴切。坚持个性就是坚持自己的立场,观点,兴趣,方法,原则,而conformity就是放弃或是选择性的放弃一些自己坚持的东西,合作是一种主动行为,而妥协是一种无奈之举,两者的效果是不完全一样的。继续引申,可理解为:虽然大多数人都承认个性的重要性,但实际上个人经济的成功需要牺牲个性。所以,提纲可以这样写:

    1个性是一个人不同其他人的qualities,正是因为有了个性,人与人之间才会有区别,才会有吸引和排斥。一个人在事业上的发展潜力,就隐含在他的个性当中。

    2任何一个公司或是行业都规定了这样那样的规则,在一定程度上限制了个性的发挥,个人只能在遵循规则的前提下发挥个性,寻求发展。

    3要获得个人的经济成功,不一定要完全限制自己的个性,一个没有个性的人是没有竞争力的,世界上的成功人士大多具有鲜明的个性,比如Bill Gates他敢于中途退学就去创业,别人却做不到,而他研发的windows系统几乎让所有人都喜爱,如果他只是依照自己的喜好搞研发,恐怕他不会有今天的成就。

    所以,个人经济的成功,既要individuality conformity. 

    25 July

    范文貌似水平不高啊?

       不管是孙远作文的范文还是网上流传的各种版本的北美范文,都有不少错误,也许是我水平还不够高,看不出人家是用了倒装还是虚拟,反正明天我不背那些范文了.我就不信了,如此重要的考试,时间又是如此的仓促,心理上也无比紧张,写出来的作文能有多高啊?
       决定背孙远写作上的那几篇美国人写的文章,可信性还比较强. 
    23 July

    GRE 啊GRE

                     What irrational decisions that I have made sofar is to prepare the GRE exam, which is totally superior my ability of English learing.  How many typical examples like this happened on me? however, life goes on.
                     I want to prove that I can do something well. Sorry, actually, I want to say I can do it excellently. But you konw, it has never happened till now. It doesn't matter, I don't care. At least, I have learnt so many elements what make me failed. And people say the failure is the mother of  success, it just too many mothers behind me. You see I am the happiest child in the world~~!
                     I have a dream that one day I walk in the compus of UC Berkerly, I have a dream that one day I buy what I want to buy no matter how much the thing is, and I have a dream that one day I talk with a little boy:" Do you konw? I fucked the world." And now the world is fucking me, that is the truth.
                     Suddenly, I turn my head over in surprise, extend my tongue to lick the dry youth of mine crazingly.